Wednesday, October 31, 2012
Daily Show - Mark Twain Freewrite
Overall, the video did make valid points concerning the revised version of Mark Twain's "Huckleberry Finn" changing the word 'nigger' to 'slave'. I, personally, think that having the word in the literature creates an idea of what times were like during the period that many slaves were of African descent. The word 'nigger' has always been a disrespectful name to call someone as such, so with the consistent mentions of the word being placed in the book, there is definitely the idea that slaves were not respected as much as they should have been. The comical approach to the entire ordeal, though, really made me laugh. Although the revised book would be more accessible to viewers who are younger and who may take offense to the word, the impact of using the word so many times in a way that is not inappropriate would have a more profound impact on the reader.
Wednesday, October 10, 2012
"Why Men Fail" - Overview
David Brook's article, "Why Men Fail", creates an argument that generally states that females are doing more successfully, not because the abilities of men are declining, but because females are adapting with current societal context. Because women are able to adapt, they have lost the feminist quality, whereas males still possess the masculine, 'dominant male' traits; which limit their potential as a part of the human race. Brook uses much logos, mainly statistics of male versus female school results and involvement in the workforce. He states that three quarters of males earn D's and F's in elementary school and high school; along with only 40 percent of them recieving bachelor's or master's degrees. Due to the failing performance of males, the employment rate from males between 25 and 54 had dropped from 96 percent to 80 percent. Though it is stated that men are still at the top of the 'corporate ladder', women still dominate twelve out of 15 of the fastest growing jobs. There are many tasks in modern society that men must adhere to, such as being sensitive and paying close attention, but they are not culturally and genetically capable of accomplishing such tasks as fluently as females do. Ethos plays a large part as well, because he claims many sources such as Michael Greenstone of the Hamilton Project who concluded that over 40 years the median income for prime-age males had dropped by 28 percent. He also uses more credible sources such as Hanna Rosin and her book, "The End of Men", and the National Federation of Independent Business. Brook uses pathos in a form that is subtle but effective. The entire article carries on with pathos, but does not contain any specificities. The article may make a male more self-conscious of the decline of his kind, while females may find it appealing to know that because they have adapted well and became the "clean slate" in today's society, they are more prone to be introduced to opportunities.
Monday, October 8, 2012
Romney and Obama - Debate #1
Both President Barack Obama and Democratic nominee, along with republican nominee, former Governor Mitt Romney entered the viewpoint of the audience and greeted each other. Throughout the night, many compelling arguments were made; along each candidate nabbing eachother about false information. Once the debate had ended, the winner was clearly Mitt Romney. The reason for it being so, was due to his assertive and professional approach to answering questions and responding to Barack Obama. Many have said that Romney was "aggressive", but others may say he is passionate about his viewpoint and wants to get it across as fluently as possible. He made statements regarding Obamacare making families pay $2,500 more dollars, while Obama claimed families would pay $2,500 less when running for office in 2008. He also mentioned how middle-income Americans had seen their income decreased by $4,300, and how there have been 122 community and small banks that have closed since Dodd-Frank. Romney did, however, make an unecessary comment towards PBS and Big Bird. Obama took a much more subtle, laid-back approach. He began by wishing his wife a Happy Anniversary in front of an audience of millions of Americans tuned in to the debate; which is a form of pathos. Barack Obama has been President for almost four years, which gives him higher credibility for preserving his position as President. He had also mentioned how Obamacare is a more efficient plan, due to the medicare voucher giving a possible cost of $6,000 to the average senior citizen; later using his grandmother as an example - another form of pathos. Obama's composure was more relaxed, but he did look away from Romney's general direction many times. Both Romney and Obama went well over their time limit of two minutes on more than one occasion. Both candidates also had their stronger spots as well as their shortcomings on Wednesday, October 3, 2012.
Wednesday, October 3, 2012
"New Rules" - Ethos, Logos, Pathos
Thomas L. Friedman's article in the New York Times, entitled New Rules, describes the modern-day America and how a citizen must work harder than people did in the past to become 'successful'. In the article, there is a more prevalent use of ethos with statements such as, "Wired magazine reported last week...", "The news from Estonia prompted The Guardian newspapaer of London to publish and online poll...", an Alvin Toffler quote saying, "Illiteracy will not be defined by those who cannot read and write, but by those who cannot learn and relearn. There are many more uses with Clinton and Obama references and such. The logos represented is especially noticed within the statement claiming that the unemployment rate is 4.1 percent for people with four years of college, 6.6 percent for those with two years, 8.8 percent for high school graduates, and 12.0 percent for dropouts. The statistics are highly powerful and convincing, because the reader will be able to comprehend the benefits of having a college education versus not having one. Friedmanalso mentions how Shanghai's public school system beat the world in math, scince, and reading in 2010. There is a considerable amount of pathos in the article. One example is, "We live in a closed system, a world of walls, which were just starting to come down." Another statement is, "Techonology and globalization are wiping out lower-skilled jobs faster, while steadily rasing the skill level required for new jobs." The statements are highly eye-opening and make a larger impression on how one must understand progression and how past ordeals are irrelevant in today's technologically advanced society.
Wednesday, September 26, 2012
Three Questions for Video Essay
- Will we be penalized, in terms of a grade, for a certain argument we make (Can the argument be too personal or based on opinion)?
- Is there a certain way that the candidates should be addressed in the essay? (i.e. President Barack Obama, or Republican Candidate, Mitt Romney)
- Is too much factual evidence of recent happenings going to hurt the essay? Does a more casual approach need to be taken for the essay?
Thursday, September 20, 2012
"MUSLIM RAGE" Newsweek Article
Overall, the rage and utter disbelief of the Muslim people is presented, simply by the photo. True anger is represented with their mouths open, yelling; and their faces clenched in emotional pain. They are all together, somewhat in the form of a riot, plus their hands are either toucing each other or in a protest gesture. The image was captured at a time that actually "captures" the intensity and turmoil of the situation. The photographer was able to take a photo of a moment involving protest, anger, scattered emotions, and violations; due to the mocking of their highly loved and regarded deity of their people. The text at the bottom, read "How I survived it. How We Can End It" also sends off the message that "surviving it" was a hassle in itself but was able to be done. It sends an amount of hope that it can be escaped. A major part of it, was the large, headlining text, "MUSLIM RAGE". The title directs the viewer's attention to the primary subject of the photo. The cover is also extremely simplistic, so the reader's main focus is the cover story and the importance that is associated with it. There is not only rage with the Muslim people, but there is also turmoil and sadness, due to the reason that they have a deep love for Muhammad. The '#muslimrag'e hash-tag trend on Twitter is a more of a sarcastic approach of Muslim people saying what actually makes them angry. The Newsweek photo portrays all Muslims, in general, as being enraged, when in reality it is only the ones that are so-called 'extremists' that are angry. It is a positive way of the Muslim people showing how a majority of them are average people with a negative label recently that leaves impressions.
Wednesday, September 19, 2012
Obama: For Decades to Come - OFA Colorado
Starting off with a massive group of Fort Collins college students, Obama's speech video includes him speaking to a large amount of hopeful students. Their reactions are then shown, and many of them reveal a powerful impact they are recieving from Obama's speech. Not only are they being impacted, but many of them are leaving an impact by promoting the election, registering to vote, and convincing others to vote. Through the duration of all events held in the video, Obama's speech is playing, which is important to the montage of people 'making a difference' and explaining his statement of how young voters made a large percentage of votes in 2008, and can make an impact by doing it more in the future. Less effective in the video, are the reactions, due to the reactions not being powerful enough to be highly convincing. The overall mood of the video is positive, simply due to the color, editing, and music. The editing of the video is simplistic but impactful, due to the montages of the students 'making a difference' coinciding with the speech, and the upbeat, motivational score. The overall impact that such things make on a personal impression are positive impressions that leave me thinking of a young voter and how I, as a young voter, can make a difference. A major, but subtle find was that when students are holding up signs at Obama's speech, they are all faced in a direction that says 'FORWARD.", a simple word that is impactful to people due to the idea of the country moving forward. When viewers see the sign multiple times, the word will stay with them. The argument is simply that the young people of today's America are the key for the future and decades to come, which is represented by him mentioning record numbers of young voters in 2008 - a form of logos. There is much pathos in the campaign video, mainly due to the audio of the speech and montage of average, hopeful people making the difference that Obama mentions throughout the speech. The compiled clips of young students is a form of ethos, mainly due to the reason that them doing what Obama mentioned is a credible way of saying that the difference is being made.
Monday, September 17, 2012
Presidential Campaign Video - Visual Analysis
Obama: For Decades to Come - OFA Colorado
1. What visual elements grab your attention first?
- The visual elements that grab my attention first, are the large majority of students standing and watching Obama's speech, along with their reactions. Obama is also shown campaigning with more students behind him, which portrays a large crowd.
2. What other details reinforce that impression? How?
- Other details that reinforce the impression, are the many small clips of students trying to make a "change" by promoting Obama's run for president by going door-to-door and holding conventions.
3. What is more important? Less important?
- The most important things, are the audio of Obama's speech playing throughout the entire video as montages of everyday students are 'making a difference'; and the less important things are the reactions of the students, because the have no major value on the impact of the video.
4. What about color and style? What impact do they have on your impressions?
- The colors in Obama's video are vibrant, which makes the entire mood positive. It is simply edited, but impactful, and the score is upbeat, motivational and positive, which coincides with the edit of the video portraying Colorado students working hard to promote Obama.
5. How does the image direct the viewer's eyes and reinforce what is important?
- Throughout the video, there are many different camera angles, but most of them prove to be important to the impact that the video makes as a whole. One major method that is somewhat subtle, is that when students are holding up the Obama signs, the word 'FORWARD' is seen in all of the signs in the same direction; which resembles Obama's plan and goal to move 'forward'.
6. What text is included? How does the text relate to the image?
- Obama's campaign video first includes the name of the city, "Fort Collins", so that the viewer knows where the video is taking place. Throughout the video, the word, 'forward' can be seen many, many times; which is major to the video, due to the fact that Barack Obama wants to move 'forward' to making America a more ideal country. At the end, 'Obama - Biden' can be seen, so the viewer is informed about who is running for president.
7. What argument is being made? Consider: when this was made (kairos), who is the
audience, what is the purpose (exigency).
- The argument that is being made, is that the young people of today's America are the key to the future and for decades to come. In Obama's speech, he explains to young people in 2012 for his new campaign, that four years ago, young people had record numbers in votes; and he basically explains that they have the power to make a 'change' and drive the country 'forward'.
8. List details that provide ethos, pathos, logos.
- The only logos that was noticed in the video, is when he mentioned the young people having record votes four years ago. There is much pathos, especially towards the young audience, due to the constant mention of young people, registering to vote, voting, and influencing future generations to vote. The montage of average students registering to vote and promoting what they believe is also somewhat in the range of pathos; but also in ethos; because they credibly portray what Obama is trying to represent in his speech.
Friday, September 14, 2012
Précis - Choices 2.0: Chapter 6
In chapter six of his book, Choices 2.0: Situations for College Writing, Joe Marshall Hardin asserts that though advertising works well with a mass amount of the population, one must truly understand the many methods, such as inhibiting cultural myth, rhetoric, etc. to make a proper argument when critiquing an advertisement. A major example that Hardin used, was the "Marlboro Cowboy" advertisement that explained showing masculinity and and rugged attitude; which would be highly admired by the majority of male viewers, due the desire of a man wanting to be like such - along with the Diet Coke critique example. His main purpose in Chapter Six, is to inform readers of methods used in mass media advertising to make one "media-savvy", in order to allow the reader to give a professional, well though out critique towards media. The audience that Hardin is writing the chapter for, is mainly an audience of students who he wants to have knowledge of the media, their methods, and examples of media critique; so the reader will possess a higher understanding of arguments that need to made and what kind of 'problem approach' needs to be made.
Monday, September 10, 2012
"Plagiarism Lines Blur" by Trip Gabriel - Précis
In his article, "Plagiarism Lines Blur for Students in Digital Age", Trip Gabriel argues that with today's technology, students gather information from other sources without knowing that they are committing the act of plagiarism; but it is more of an act of borrowing ideas such as modern television and music does today. Gabriel begins the article by explaining incidents involving students leaving the purple shade copied from a website, copying and pasting from Wikipedia articles, as well as a German student who had a best-selling novel that lifted passages from other material. The authors purpose is to show examples of how having access to any intellectual material obtained legally or illegally is becoming common action for young people, in order to portray the idea that students unknowingly plagiarize material from others due to a decline in authenticity; only being attributed to the technology of today. Gabriel's main audience would be the young audience that is specified in the article; due to his tone and presentation being casual, and explaining the certain aspects of todays technology that encourage young people to 'steal' intellectual property - which would give young readers the impression that he understands why they do so.
Occupy Art Photo: Visual Analysis
With the photo presented, the first thing that caught my attention was the middle class man who seems to be alone, lost, and hopeless. Compared to the buffalo, the man is far away in terms of distance. He is identifiable as being a middle class man by the words "middle class" printed on his torso. The words on his torso are important, because if the words were not there, one would assume he is just an overweight male in the middle of the field, possibly looking for buffaloes to hunt and eat; or he has dementia. On another note, the caption above the adult buffalo's head represents the point of the visual clearly, but is not mandatory to get the point across. Compared to the smaller buffalo's eyes, the adult buffalo has weary, tired eyes; which can imply it is knowledgeable and had experienced an era in which the middle class race was high in population. Due to the style of the visual being colorful and cartoonish, a sensitive and serious subject transforms into a more comical and simple representation of the current struggle for the middle class man. As mentioned, the distance of the buffalo and the man are relatively different. Due to the man being farther away, it appears that the buffaloes, though they are an endangered species, are less scarce than the middle class population who are very low in population and are close to what may be extinction. Altogether, the argument that is being made, is that the middle class population is becoming a dying race, and they will eventually be low enough in quantity to the point that they are more "endangered" than the aforementioned animal. Also, it is seen in nature, as opposed to being in society; meaning that there is really no use for them at the time of the visual due to advances in technology and a decline in jobs or careers for middle class citizens. Though it seems that the image is comical and not serious, one can identify that it is a striking visual; because it thoroughly explains in a subtle manner how the future of the middle class man may be in a more exagerrated form.
Romney and Obama Campaign Videos - Visual Analysis
Due to the different positions of Barack Obama and Mitt Romney, their campaign videos took unique approaches in terms of the portrayal of their career and their visions for the country's future. With Obama already being president, he made the argument that mistakes were made, and lessons were learned from mistakes; which would give the voters a thought to give him a 'second chance'. On the other hand, Romney made use of his wife to give the credibility that he is dedicated to get the United States back on its feet with whatever it takes. When viewing the videos for the first time, the beginning of each one is completely different. Obama's video shows homes of what can be considered the middle class then portrays Wall Street and the struggle of the American people to find jobs along with the 9/11 attack. By displaying the aforementioned details, it shows that Obama understands and is not blind to today's struggles in America. To juxtapose with Obama's video, Romney's was much different in the introduction of the video. Romney's video displayed a happier, more enthusiastic America by showing the Olympic games and successes of the country.
Both Romney and Obama had their wives speak in their videos, so there was a sort of credibility in the wives speaking. Michelle Obama spoke of Obama's struggles in the office and his strong determination to get America back on its feet. Ann Romney did not speak of Romney's determination, but spoke more of their marriage and her diagnosis of multiple sclerosis. Ann Romney explained more of a dedication to family, which could give viewers the idea that Mitt Romney would have a strong dedication to the country as well. The visuals in the videos were similar in some aspects and different in others. Both of the videos portrayed America and its successes and downfalls, such as happy families and the Olympic games, or the attack on the World Trade Center and financial struggles. Romney's was more uplifting in terms of the visuals, music, and him and his wife speaking together as what seems to be a happily married couple. Obama's was still positive, but it seemed to show the reality of today's economy and that he understands that measures that need to be taken to commence the slow process of getting America back to where it once was.
At the end of Romney's video, there is a montage of people speaking highly of Romney and what he has done in the past. In Obama's video, Joe Biden, Michelle Obama, and Bill Clinton all highly regard Obama and speak of him as the better choice. Both did not use much Logos, but both used a large amount of Pathos. The pathos is used to emotionally convince the viewer that one candidate is better than the other in terms of their hardships, their past, or just their family dedication. Both videos presented the points rather well.
Both Romney and Obama had their wives speak in their videos, so there was a sort of credibility in the wives speaking. Michelle Obama spoke of Obama's struggles in the office and his strong determination to get America back on its feet. Ann Romney did not speak of Romney's determination, but spoke more of their marriage and her diagnosis of multiple sclerosis. Ann Romney explained more of a dedication to family, which could give viewers the idea that Mitt Romney would have a strong dedication to the country as well. The visuals in the videos were similar in some aspects and different in others. Both of the videos portrayed America and its successes and downfalls, such as happy families and the Olympic games, or the attack on the World Trade Center and financial struggles. Romney's was more uplifting in terms of the visuals, music, and him and his wife speaking together as what seems to be a happily married couple. Obama's was still positive, but it seemed to show the reality of today's economy and that he understands that measures that need to be taken to commence the slow process of getting America back to where it once was.
At the end of Romney's video, there is a montage of people speaking highly of Romney and what he has done in the past. In Obama's video, Joe Biden, Michelle Obama, and Bill Clinton all highly regard Obama and speak of him as the better choice. Both did not use much Logos, but both used a large amount of Pathos. The pathos is used to emotionally convince the viewer that one candidate is better than the other in terms of their hardships, their past, or just their family dedication. Both videos presented the points rather well.
Thursday, September 6, 2012
Ann Romney & Michelle Obama - Speech Response
Both Ann Romney and Michelle Obama gave speeches that can be deemed as "powerful". Ann Romney gave the impression that she is listening to America when she said, "I have heard your voices" which may appeal to the audience that feels as if they are not being heard. Michelle Obama, on the other hand, appealed to the audience that are struggling or have struggling families due to her claim that she grew up with a family who was low on money and were not materialistic. Both Obama and Romney both gave speeches that did not attack other politicians or political races, which made it much more bearable to watch without being biased or hateful towards their biased statements. Romney and Obama did not make any appeal to logos, which made it slightly less convincing than it could have been; but too much logos would make it seem to be robotic. They used a high amount of pathos by stating past struggles, love stories, or national disasters and sympathy for the victims. For example, Ann Romney brought a recent earthquake to light and mentioned her sympathy for the tragic event. As for Michelle Obama, she mentioned her father with multiple sclerosis who struggled, but still hardly missed work; just to support his family. They are both powerful uses of pathos that can definitely "touch the hearts" of viewers. Something else they did similarly, was the portrayal of how they met with their husbands, who are both presidential candidates, and how the experience has not changed them as individuals. They also mentioned how their husbands were hard working, family-oriented, caring individuals who built their success. Romney's statement, "You'll hear women sighing more than men", is a statement that may appeal to a female audience; due to it's qualities of being more representative towards the female race and their 'hard working' qualities of raising children, being sisters, etc. Stating their struggles as examples also appeal to ethos, due to the credibility of them dealing with situations that an 'average' American deals with today. With me being an independent voter, my views did not alter my perception of their message. I listened with an open mind and took note of both their faults and enlightening statements. The speeches had the potential to be much more convincing, but their approaches were still portrayed well.
Wednesday, September 5, 2012
Choices 2.0: Situations for College Writing (Chapter 3) - Précis
In Chapter three of Joe Marshall Hardin's book, "Choices 2.0: Situations for College Writing", he claims that one must decide how to support a main idea, purpose, and thesis of a piece of writing in order to make a larger, more efficient impact on the reader. Marshall supports his claims by explaining how one can gain credibility in ways such as self-experience and the experience of others and how they all tie in with ethos, logos, and pathos; along with taking a "problem approach" to make an argument that seems minimal become an argument that is actually worth bringing to light and creating an argument about. The purpose of Marshall's writing is to inform and educate readers about the proper approach to writing a more credible and impactful piece of writing, in order to have a valid argument that will convince the reader to think of the writer's approach and thoughts; without the use of opinions or unrelateable experiences. Clearly, the audience that Marshall is writing towards, are people, such as students, who should be informed of proper ways of making valid argumentative claims and the methods that make an argument more impactful.
Monday, September 3, 2012
The Web Means the End of Forgetting - Response
"The Web Means the End of Forgetting", by Jeffery Rosen, is an article which deals with modern day risks of posting certain content online to sites such as social networking sites (e.g. Facebook, Twitter). The jobs of people and their reputations are at stake with how far social networking has come. Rosen provided very valid information by explaining a study about how 75 percent of U.S. recruiters and human-resource professionals report that their companies require them to do online research about candidates and applicants. It means that any content posted online that is deemed as "inappropriate" behavior can cost them their chances of getting a job. A perfect example is Stacy Snyder's "Drunken Pirate" photo, which was a Myspace photo that had gotten her terminated from her job as a student teacher. Rosen uses many credible sources in the article such as citing the University of California, a Harvard Law School teacher and graduate, along with book writer, Viktor Mayer-Schönberger. Rosen claims, "The internet is shackling us to everything that we have ever said, or that anyone has said about us..." along with, "...being so shackled by our digital past that we are unable to evolve and learn from our mistakes." The statements made have an emotional impact, because being 'shackled' by mistakes or a reputation made online makes life seem as if it got much more difficult to cope with, due to easier exposure of things that were kept private in the past. Overall, Jeffery Rosen's presentation given in his article is extremely logical and makes one look at how the online world has caused an unfortunate risk in the real world. He explained how at one time in Babylonian Talmud, any form of gossip or tale-bearing was a sin. Today, it is nothing but a mere "rumor". Rosen was logical, added credible sources, and created a strong emotional impact in showing how the internet today can impact a person's life.
Wednesday, August 29, 2012
Dr. McGonigal on Gaming - Response
At the beginning of Dr. Jane McGonigal's speech, she immediately introduces herself as a game designer who is affiliated with the Research Institute of the Future. Showing an image of a young gentleman playing a video game, it seemed to just cause the audience to not take it seriously; but when she dove deeper into the face of the player, she explained the "epic win", and the feeling of surprise and optimism on the boys face in the photo. She then contrasted it with what she called an, "I'm not good at life face". Right then, Dr. McGonigal created a highly compelling argument dealing with how people in society should play more video games. Using logos, she described how currently 3 billion hours a week are spent playing games when 21 billion hours of gameplay a week is ideal for the future. She goes on to explain using pathos how in the "game world", an individual can feel more hope and motivation - a higher sense of bliss and willingness to aid in saving a world. Although the logic may be deemed as questionable, she encouraged her statements by making a relation to how gamers feel a higher sense of belonging socially and mentally in a video game world, as opposed to the real world. She explains how games have possibly saved a culture 2,500 years ago playing a game with dice made of sheep's knuckles. The mentioned game is known as the first game ever created, and the culture survived for eighteen years eating and playing games. Years later, DNA evidence had shown the Atruscans had some similar genetics to the other 'culture' that died. She used her career as a game designer as a credible source, which is ethos, and she also referenced books from credible authors and studies along with the game World of Warcraft to make an example.
Personally, I would assume that video games saving mankind is a bit too far fetched, but not impossible. I have noticed that when people play games such as the aforementioned, "World of Warcraft", they are very ecstatic in terms of how they view that virtual world. They are determined to reach a goal that is made possible for them, so when they do reach their goal; they get the "epic win". If society sets drastic goals that are possible in the real world, the world as a whole would definitely be better. If the same people used decision making, their physical and mental abilities, and the urge to better their real world; positive changes would take effect. Dr. McGonigal created a very plausible argument that turned out to be quite astonishing.
Personally, I would assume that video games saving mankind is a bit too far fetched, but not impossible. I have noticed that when people play games such as the aforementioned, "World of Warcraft", they are very ecstatic in terms of how they view that virtual world. They are determined to reach a goal that is made possible for them, so when they do reach their goal; they get the "epic win". If society sets drastic goals that are possible in the real world, the world as a whole would definitely be better. If the same people used decision making, their physical and mental abilities, and the urge to better their real world; positive changes would take effect. Dr. McGonigal created a very plausible argument that turned out to be quite astonishing.
Kent Haruf Essay Precis
In Kent Haruf's essay, "Writers on Writing; To See Your Story Clearly, Start by Pulling the Wool Over Your Own Eyes" (2000), he claims that the many obscure methods and habits of writers are substantial to creating a unique creation and forming a special connection between the author and what they are writing. Haruf supports his claim by giving examples of six renowned authors and methods they had used to make their creation unique and fresh, then he leads it up to his unique methods of writing; such as him using the coal room with a desk, art on the wall, and obscure objects to decorate his desk. Haruf's purpose is to shed light on the use of unique writing methods in order to persuade the reader to better understand and accept the use of object placement and writing location; along with convincing readers to respect credible writers who have done so. Haruf appears to be writing to a casual, curious, and open-minded audience, due to his more informal writing in the essay; just to let the reader better understand how methods people deem as "wierd" are substantial to creating a piece of a work with a certain mood or purpose.
Wednesday, August 22, 2012
Welcome to My Blog...
Welcome to my blog. Throughout the time I use this blog, I will post many meaningful and substantially life changing stories, personal thoughts, and artistic, mental images through words. I will define the meaning of the English language, and show everyone, "who is boss". For example:
"This blog is pregnant with multitudes of blossoming ideas and I taste the knowledge as each letter tickles each tastebud as I read them. Yum!"
See... I used an interjection, which is a very major part of speech. I also inserted personification to make the letters exhibit human-like qualities. 'Yum!' means, "delicious - or tasty" in terms of the tickling of the tastebuds being satisfying to the sense of taste. In addition to what was previously mentioned, the idea of the blog being pregnant portrays the sense of the blog being "full; lively with the seed of blossoming ideas" - a fetus that is developing into a blossoming idea - or ideas, if there are twins, triplets, quadruplets, and so on.
I highly look forward to communicating with the fine, young people who inhabit my classroom. This blog is the beginning - the seed which has been planted into the womb. Throughout the period of the class, the fetus will grow until it reaches the point of completion; and a beautiful birth will be given. I'm not too sure if my idea will be an carnivore, herbivore, or omnivore. I'm also not sure about how many limbs it will contain; but what I do know, is that I will have unconditional love for my idea.
"What is an idea?" You ask... according to the Merriam-Webster dictionary:
idea noun \ī-ˈdē-ə, ˈīd-(ˌ)ē-ə\ -an entity (as a thought, concept, sensation, or image) actually or potentially present to consciousness.
My blog will definitely feel sensation when the idea is born... if you get my drift.
Please do communicate with me. I will gladly speak to you. I will also leave updates on the gradual evolution of my idea in the blog's womb.
Thank you for reading,
Daniel Vasquez
"This blog is pregnant with multitudes of blossoming ideas and I taste the knowledge as each letter tickles each tastebud as I read them. Yum!"
See... I used an interjection, which is a very major part of speech. I also inserted personification to make the letters exhibit human-like qualities. 'Yum!' means, "delicious - or tasty" in terms of the tickling of the tastebuds being satisfying to the sense of taste. In addition to what was previously mentioned, the idea of the blog being pregnant portrays the sense of the blog being "full; lively with the seed of blossoming ideas" - a fetus that is developing into a blossoming idea - or ideas, if there are twins, triplets, quadruplets, and so on.
I highly look forward to communicating with the fine, young people who inhabit my classroom. This blog is the beginning - the seed which has been planted into the womb. Throughout the period of the class, the fetus will grow until it reaches the point of completion; and a beautiful birth will be given. I'm not too sure if my idea will be an carnivore, herbivore, or omnivore. I'm also not sure about how many limbs it will contain; but what I do know, is that I will have unconditional love for my idea.
"What is an idea?" You ask... according to the Merriam-Webster dictionary:
idea noun \ī-ˈdē-ə, ˈīd-(ˌ)ē-ə\ -an entity (as a thought, concept, sensation, or image) actually or potentially present to consciousness.
My blog will definitely feel sensation when the idea is born... if you get my drift.
Please do communicate with me. I will gladly speak to you. I will also leave updates on the gradual evolution of my idea in the blog's womb.
Thank you for reading,
Daniel Vasquez
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